Thursday, October 21, 2010

Kingwood, Texas: Not Your Average Suburbia







Thesis: Even though it is suburban and has more trees than buildings, Kingwood has a serene, yet lively, Town Center and is always plagued by the randomness of imaginative teens, adding to the diversity of Houston.

Body Paragraph: Though it is often overflowing with people, Town Center gives of a calmness and sense of community which can be found nowhere else. Outsiders may see only stores in the strip malls that line the intersection, but I see stories and memories that have been made throughout my eight years of living in Kingwood. Behind the bright McDonald’s, an outdoor stage in the middle of a round-about provides an area to hold community events. I remember going to a local charity’s fund-raising concert which was held there; several booths like the ones used in carnivals, were set up in the grass surrounding the stage, and when the band played their first song, all of Town Center moved with the beat. Traffic through the crowded intersection slowed that night, and people rolled down their windows to taste the music, to feel it vibrate through their souls. Even with the hundreds of people in the small area, we felt a strong connection; we were Kingwood; we were Texas; we were one.

4 comments:

  1. I like the way you describe the bond in the community. You might be able to expand on how the music felt by telling what type of music was playing. Great job overall.

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  2. Wow this is awesome! It just about gave me the chills. You do a great job at really describing the closeness and bonds throughout the community. As I was reading, I could imagine all of the memories you've experienced there and why they're so special to you. Great job!

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  3. This was informally yet professionally written. Your last two sentences of the body paragraph gave me chills. Good word choice, "taste the music," but maybe you could use sense of hearing to describe music as well. Good job

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  4. That's beatiful when you use your own memory to describe a place.I like the comparision of the view between outsiders and you. That sentence formed your tone of the essay.

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