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Huntsville State Park serves as a recreational area where man meets the wild and serves as an escape from the city.
As the dawn breaks, light shines glistening the park and its lake. the park is used as a recreational area in which campsites are registered for those who want to experience the nature in their own backyard. the fragrance of the multiple pine trees brings an aurora to your nostrils as you wake up. Huntsville State Park is the pride of which I have for Texas, it shows the wild side as well as the serenity all in one. Texas is truly the blossom of the US and Huntsville is truly the blossom of Texas. The nature to some is a bother, but to most including myself view it as an escape. Slower and slower our lives back in the city are becoming faster and faster; pretty soon our days feel like seconds and minutes and we see our lives flashing before our very own eyes. However, in Huntsville, that fast paced day becomes seconds of peace and tranquility that soothes the heart and embraces the mind
I love the use of sensory details in this paragraph. It gets confusing when you explain the way time feels in the city. Overall t=you did a pretty good job.
ReplyDeleteYour use of details vividly paint a picture in my mind when I read this. I feel like I'm actually there watching the sun rise. I feel like I can see all the green in the park. I am considering going to this park now that I've read your description.
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